All Comments on 'A Stroll Down the Beach'

Sadly, the sound effects diidn't come over so well here, in fact, if you hadn't introduced them at the top of your text, I would have sworn it was a dodgy recording device.

The story was nice, living up to your previous erotic best.

I'm disappointed that the sound hasn't come out clearly for you. It's a first effort; I think that we'll get better with the next one. Thanks much for commenting about the actual story nevertheless.

(((HUG)))

Hey you tried with the background effect and it didn't come over that well, still good story and sexy voice.

Keep posting babe and no worries!

The audio wasn`t mixed as well as it could have been. Rather than waves and seagulls, it just sounds like white noise and it overshadows the dialogue and makes it hard to hear. Good idea though and I very much enjoyed the story itself. I hope to hear more just like it and maybe even a remixed version of this story.

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Would you believe it that I went to the beach yesterday and tried to record the sound of waves and birds with a view to trying again? It didn't work because the sounds of civilisation interrupted me on several occasions and rendered those attempts useless. I will keep trying to get it right though, I promise...