All Comments on 'Feel Your Skin'

I like the storyline and it is very kinky and erotic.

They need to take some of that gas home with them, and find out how long the effects last, and how many times she can orgasm in one night.

A great story and thanks for the read.

i liked the build up thanks for a great read

Well done. Ignore the world class spellers, they don't have the brain to create a scenario like the one you have written.

Thanks Don

great story... nicely done.. who cares about minor spelling errors... great job as always.... thank you for this story

I am hard as a rock after reading that- cannot wait for my wife to get home

Who had the image of Bane when the mask and gas were mentioned. Seriously though, very good story with an unique concept. A proof read probably would of helped but honestly I read right over the spelling and grammar mistakes with ease. Stop nitpicking the small shit people.

... I'd like to see this story line continue

I liked the story idea. I wish the author had used more descriptive words such as pussy, tits, etc instead of being so clinical.

This is all for fun and to stimulate our fantasy, we don't have to be hard with the writer,it's not real. It was sexy and easy to keep going with the story. Hope you bring more like this in the near future....Thank you....

I didn't think I would enjoy the story, but I did. You should write a second chapter for this story. Perhaps a lab accident that causes a three way between the Mother, her Son, and the other scientist.

Wen i first started reading i thought the story was not going to be as good but i liked it although i would had enjoyed more foreplay

I love stories that commit just as much effort to the characters and plot as the sex. More would be appreciated.

Really excellent story, even if a well worn theme!

Wish you'd go on with this story. Wanna see where it goes with Marisa and her sons.

would like to see part 2 where marisa sneaks in with her sons

Where does one get the grant money to conduct these kinds of experiments?

I watch sc fi tv most of the time and this story could be on it.

First, to the idiots who go over each story word for word and sentence by sentence, Bull! This story was great and I was so into it that I didn't notice any errors or even cared.

Most of the stories I read are about mothers who see their sons masturbating and get hot and bothered but do nothing. And conversely, sons who see their mothers naked and do nothing. This goes on for days until they have sex. This with the "we shouldn't be doing this" dialog.

This story was different. It started out as a real science project and I suspect that it may be going on for real.

Someone had to have the idea for sexual products that we see on line and in the stores. There is a woman scientist in Pennsylvania who advertises in regular magazines trying to sell her pheromone product.

The fact that the mother inhaled that stuff and got horny and fucked her son wasn't bad. It could have been a test subject.

This story was good . Lets see more.

I was sure the three of them were going to get it on when she threw off the mask and let the gas run in the room. Kind of sounds like Marisa has been experimenting at home too.

This story is really plausible. It could really happen with a spill or a leak in a lab. Great idea!

Wasn't too erotic but was a interesting concept. I'd like to see more. 3/5

about how they continued the test and experiment. And at home they slept in the same bed and fucked like animals!!

ditto x infinity

Amanda couldn't believe how good her son's cock felt, he filled her pussy perfectly. "Oh harder honey, I love the way the head of your cock feels as its hitting my pussy bottom," she instructs her son. "Fuck me Robert, fuck your mother good!" Amanda cried out. Robert thrust hard into Amanda's hungry cunt, causing her to verbalize her experience. "Oh Robert, you fuck me so good baby!" "I love your cock pounding me, oh, oh, oh, oh, oh yes, oh yes, oh honey, oh honey!" "You're going to make your mother cum!" "Ah, ah, ah, ah, oh god, oh god, Aaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!

...this one begs for one, with Marissa taking some of the pheromones home with her to "conduct experiments," with her sons.

Maybe have her take them to the office, and at the end, get caught by Amanda, who maybe helps out taking care of one or both of the sons. Maybe they are so aroused, that mom could only take so much, so Amanda has to take over.

She needs to experiment more with her son! She needs to milk him absolutely dry!!!

Great story!

As always, that was great, a little short but sweet.

More, please!

Part 2?

I love it!

meaning you should indeed make a second chapter, if not more. Can't help wondering if Marisa actually WAS on her period or not. Anyway, I would say Dr. Ledgard and her son have made a very important (non) scientific discovery! And, unless the Doctor was on the pill, I'd say the Ledgards will be welcoming a new baby very soon.

What a story!!!!!!!!!!

Great Fucking job!!!!!!!!

Sounds like a Pt. 2 should happen when they left the lab to go home.

Excellent story and writing. Plot logically developed. GThe ending was perfect, to wit" mother/scientist discovers/remenbers that love and sex requires human interaction. Human intimacy, emotional sensitivity and sexual passion can not be duplicated by a machine and chemicals.

Great story. Plenty of options for new chapters. Besides bringing the story "home", Marisa and her two sons has potential also.

I like the story for several reasons. The symmetrical build up for instance. I'm also grateful for the short length of most of HeyAll's stories, in opposition to many other commentators. There are lots of stories here that drag on and on and that are populated with a menagerie of characters who fuck each and every of the other protagonists. I'm glad that a few authors like HeyAll cater to my taste. Thanks for sharing your incredible talent. To deliver such sort but nontheless well rounded stories with relatable, lively personnel isn't easily achieved.