All Comments on 'By the Beach'

could use more chapters

Personally, I'd prefer a little more build up.

By the way, I think you meant "epilogue," not "prologue."

We are keen reading more about Lisbeth.

Became a tad shallow by the halfway mark.

... the help of a good proof-reader and a good Editor.

Far too many silly errors!!

too rushed

I mean, really - Who says that a Prologue has to come BEFORE the story? How passe'!

When you write the next installment (and I hope you will), perhaps you could preface it with an Epilogue!

:D

Did need one more edit, however. Can't wait for the next installment.

Very entertaining. Thanks for sharing.