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by Sean Renaud

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fafhrd09fafhrd09almost 11 years ago
Only Problem...

...is your spelling and grammar. This was a five-star story given three because every time I hit a "but" where "butt" was what you meant, it threw me out of the story. Not breaking your reader out of the narrative is important!

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