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All That Jazz - First Time

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by Salmonerd07/10/13

Amazing.

This was a real joy to listen to. Every minute is absolutely fantastic! Great playing and playing while I was playing. Thank you.

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WoW

Amazing from start to finish...

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by Dazkam5707/11/13

What a Symphony!

Raven, first off, omg. This audio was absolute pleasure to the ears. It starts off slow, but you nail the build up so perfectly. Even though I'm a guy, I sure wish I had been Devyn just to receive and be taken care so thoughtfully as Dena did. Perfect workmanship of all characters and what you would expect them to do. Playing on a piano while someone else plays the piano is one hot idea.

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by Anonymous07/12/13

mmmm...

It Was very enjoyable, I came several times during the recording! Looking forward to more ;)

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by Anonymous07/14/13

wow

I came the hardest I ever had listening to this story. I think I am going to sign up for pianio lessons.Great job

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by Anonymous07/14/13

love!!

As a musician and teacher, I loved this so much.
Such a sexy idea and wonderful as always, Raven!!
Very hot at the end. This goes into my library for many future hearings.
Thanks for another amazing one.

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by Anonymous07/15/13

I LOVED IT !!!

I was enthralled with it, could not move it was so good....it got me hot and bothered that's how much I loved it

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by Anonymous07/16/13

great

This was a great story; thoroughly enjoyed. A side note what was the song in the background when the teacher was masterbating?

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by Anonymous07/18/13

Man that wants both of you little girls

Fun listening, ok, let's go on, like you play, and your desires.... Hm. Where is your clit babe, You like it a lot, that's where a man's hand would be good.... and so on.

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by Anonymous07/18/13

I found the music playing during your narration to be extremely annoying and distracting. Other than that it was great, as always.

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by mydirtymind10007/24/13

As A Jazzman!!

As A Jazzman I felt this was so AWESOME, RAVEN you are so talented, so sexy, so loving, passionate, and down-right unforgettable. The music playing as you made yourself cum was a touch of genius. This is now my favorite. Please give us more-more-more.

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by Anonymous07/30/13

Raven my dear WOW. Yet again you have outdone yourself. I have heard the voice that played "Devyn" before in your lustful tales. Perfect contrast her innocence and nievity meshes so well with your strength and power. Predator and prey. Your a wonder my dear. I envision you dark and distant. Since I discovered you I no longer find pleasure in visual porn. Your voice tells a story to the ear and mind that the eye can't see. I will contine to revel in your mastery of your craft. And on a personal note I found a voice that like you speaks calm to my dark waters. Her name is Christina Scabbia. If you ever had a dark twin... Ooh there's a fantasy

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by dylan_t10/29/13

Deliscious!

sweet and tasty

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by Anonymous05/15/14

Sequel please!

Would love the story to continue with the teacher taking the young student in her arms and carrying her to the bedroom, where she teaches her all the ways of lesbian love making.

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by juan2fork06/08/14

Amazing

2 beautiful speaking voices and the musicianship. Great story well presented.

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by drseaknight08/11/14

Well written, orchestrated, and performed.

I thoroughly enjoyed being in both women's head as they were moved along by the undercurrent of lust beneath their musical interlude. I enjoyed the innocence of your younger second voice and the right/wrong dichotomy within both of your teacher/student relationship. You have a real writing and performing talent.

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