All Comments on 'Taken'

excellent story board - one insignificant wish:(her right breast always looked flatter than the other) thicker breasts would have been killer - you already had her in superb lingerie and legwear - well done and keep going - she looked delicious - what a fuck she promises - well done - wish I had a doll like that - thank you.

yukimi

This is unbelievably bad stuff! It is not up to the standards of this site for even the crappiest of its written work.

Thank you for your comment. Since this was NEVER INTENDED TO BE WRITTEN WORK but an ADULT COMIC. I will take your comment as a compliment.

Thank you

The Kzinti are a catlike alien race in Larry Niven's sci-fi work. I kept waiting for her to turn into a feline...

Your denotes possession. You're is a contraction for you are.

For me,I was unable to see much as the panels were all dark. Couldn't tell or

see any actions.

Not long enough, & some panels to dark to make out whats happening. But I really like your work. Thank You.

As stated...some panels too dark. Otherwise good. Need a follow up story, and a little longer. Hot. Heck this could turn in to a whole series.

too dark

exellent but a bit hurried n you had no patience to make her attractive after her boots came off - your Long Christmas was much, much better - after a while, you did not even care to make the heroine pretty, poor girl.

YUKIMI and I'm a man

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I liked the art work but it was too dark......