All Comments on 'Sharing Susan Ch. 02'

written by a brain dead kookoo

it's nice to read something off the beaten path. Take your time.

eat shit and die! thank you

This is different and fun. Keep going!

Because, obviously you do not have one. You sick mutant.

At least for me. The first was erotic wife watching, but now we're devolving into sissy crap. You're losing my interest.

Well written and erotic. Can't wait for the next installment.

I have to apologize for the assholes who don't even have the nerve to leave comments with their names but hide behind the "anonymous" tag. Please ignore them and continue submitting your stories. I, for one, enjoyed both chapters and can't wait for you to continue this series. Overall, I thought both chapters were well-written, although some paragraphs were rather lengthy. Still, that didn't detract from the basic theme; an emotion that many men who are married or date an attractive, sexual woman experience. It has a lot to do with the pride a man may feel in his woman; a need to know that she is desired by others, but possessed by just one.

Love the story. I hope the next chapter arrives soon. The husband is ready to share his wife.

You pompous turd. I suppose oldauthor is your given name you peebrained twit? OH! Its not? Then your just as anonymous as anyone else on this site dumbo. God I hate you people who scream about anonymous and are using a false moniker in the process. What a hypocrite. BTW. This story is not my cup of tea. The husband suddenly turns into a wimp? Ray starts treating him like a two year old.. Sure Like that is going to happen Not worth rating the story because its going down the cuckold highway of humiliation and degradation.

The only one that needs to be ignored is a prick asshole like you that don't have enough sense to stop complaining about others opinions. Everybody has their own idea of good erotica. If it doesn't float their boat, they have as much a right to state their displeasure as you have to state yours. But assholes like you don't seem to understand that. Stop whining about the anonymous, it's getting old. So if my name is "twittlethumb" would that make you feel better. Call me anonymous 1. Feel better now?

Guess Ill take oldauthors advice and ignore the asshole. BTW Oldauthor is the one that said ignore the assholes. I guess he was talking about you. Feel better twiddlethumb? One last thing did you read the story? You certainly did not comment on it Commenting on the comments. Whose the retard twiddles?

I love my wife, she is hot and never, fucking ever have I felt one little bit like sharing her. To do this shit you got to be one fucked up guy and the wife a slut. No other answer you stupid fag. This has nothing at all to do with pride, love, family, or anything honorable, this is a sick fetish.

One of the things that bug me here is authors that take a long time between chapters. In this case something like 6 months.

You completely forget the story and have to re-read to get the sense. Except you always feel like you're reading a book for the second time. It wrecks the experience.

This is a great start to a story but please no more long delays.

In all my years, I've known many people and I've nover known any who believe and behave like these characters. Submissive cuckold husband not only shares his wife but submits to her bull and gets pleasure from it. Really? A good question: Do any readers who don't share these values get pleasure from reading about them? I sure don't.

Congratulations for such a fantastic story!!!!!

THANKS!!!! ... and continue it soon, please ;)

I have enjoyed both of your chapters. The story is developing well and is well written. Like you, I have suffered from the trolls here who object so strongly to stories on a cuckold, hotwife or wife-watching theme. How they can be so aggressive about such a harmless subject when there is so much incest, non-consent and rape on this site bewilders and offends me. My one word of advice is to stop posting to the Loving Wives section. Don't stop posting though. Post instead to another heading. I have found that stories on this theme attract much more troll activity when posted in Loving Wives. Maybe it is just that our definition of a Loving Wife is diametrically opposed to theirs.

I think you have captured the dilemma and conflict in a wife-watchers head very well, as you lead up to the call that will extend his quandary. If I have a small criticism, it is that, in the story at least, he crosses that particular Rubicon too quickly. In reality, anyone who has experienced this conflict for themselves will go through days and weeks of agonizing conflict before taking that step. I realize that weeks may have passed in the storyline, but your reader hasn't experienced them, so it comes as a bit of a shock.

Keep writing! Don't be put off! Years ago I suggested to Literotica that they introduce a cuckold section to help avoid the Loving Wives trolls, but they didn't take up the idea.

Good luck,

Rotter

This is a good chapter. The Future Bull takes the initiative very quickly and firmly, but is not at all disrespectful to Hubby. However, his direction to Hubby to not orgasm until permission is given is a strong portent of their future!

This was not quite the image of the Bull I originally formed, but it IS consistent with what was actually written! I had configured Ray as a dumpy 'throw-away' character who would just serve to awaken the 'sleeping fox' in Sweetie.

Nicely done. 5*

Thank you for this erotic story. It is so hot. I loved it. Keep up the good work

Takes a lot of courage to be a mentally ill fool and share your willing whore.