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What the Hell Are You Looking At?

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by Anonymous07/12/13

Delightful!

Haven't we all wondered what explanation Manet would have had for the scene?
I have always assumed that the second woman also belonged to the party, washing before or after, never noticed the boat. Maybe they all came by the boat to a "safely" secluded spot - except for you and the artist.

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by thebuffalo07/13/13

I am truly impressed. This is extremely well written.

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by Oleguy07/29/13

Fascinating approach.

Most impressed by your variations on a masterpiece. I too have wondered what on earth he was trying to say when he displayed those comely ladies.
Nice job!

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by Privates1stClass09/13/13

"Nice tits,"

was all I could say. What did she expect? After all, she was the one sitting naked in the grass.

Great story about how it might have been.

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by oggbashan05/04/14

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I liked it but would have preferred more dialogue between those he was watching. Why was she the only one nude? It might be interesting to explore how they came to be in the situation pictured.

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by AMoveableBeast05/06/14

I knew what this was from the title!

I don't use this word to describe erotica much, but this story was absolutely adorable. I'm an art buff myself, so I appreciate this especially. This idea was simply inspired! I can't stop laughing. It's all so cute, and lurid and sexy, but, more than anything, cute! It's, another word I barely use, raunchy but the cleverness and the, I don't know, originality of it.

Was this for a contest? If not, how wonderfully unusual. Even if it was, damn clever. :)

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