All Comments on 'Snow on the Roof'

by SlipLuvver

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kriss4912kriss4912over 10 years ago
SLIPS RULE

Great well told story and a super read just wish it had happened to me nearly did a few times but never got to that last stage. Agree with you slips are a dying out fashion item which is such a shame

winterreisserwinterreisserover 10 years ago
Nice change!

A decently written and easy to read story.

Interesting to be able to visualise the domestic arrangements and the generic location!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Good Start

I just wish he had fucked her! Tom Jones or Zorba would never have left her wanting to be fucked.

mojorisin1967mojorisin1967over 10 years ago
Nice story.

We're keen to read more about Danny's experiences with this hot Lady.

w8ingnoww8ingnowover 10 years ago
Good story

There should be more to this.

SlipLuvverSlipLuvverover 10 years agoAuthor

Thank you for all your comments. For those who think there should be more, don't worry, there is. The sequel should be on line soon, then you will find out whether Danny and Kath get it together..or not.

horneyfox69horneyfox69over 10 years ago

Very nice, and at her age, it his nice to find a man that young that is willing to assist her is having organisms Of course he is not having a great time! LOL

fox

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