All Comments on 'Swan's Song: The Birdcage Ch. 02'

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jennyb2492jennyb2492almost 11 years ago
Delightful

I am intrigued by her new home... It sounds amazing... But will we find out her story? How did she become a slave? Was it willingly but then went wrong at her other master's place? It's too soon (I hope) for everything to be going right...

Can't wait for more!

jennyb2492jennyb2492almost 11 years ago
Forgot..

Don't suppose you'd consider keeping this in BDSM? A lot of us who like these stories watch that category carefully for updates to our favorite Master/slave stories.

Just a thought....

mickymouse113mickymouse113almost 11 years ago
Lacie

Without any background informaton this reminds me of Lacie by Dancingwizard. I am curious about how this is going and the relationship between Masters. Are they brothers or best friends.

I know a woman can come between 2 people very easily and I am curious as to 'Swans' Value.

I'll happily read the next chapter and hope it remains delightfully romantic even if it is presently light.

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
A wonderful step up for Swan.

You have woven a wonderful fairy tale. I hope it stays that way for Swan. I like your pacing. The story is moving forward quickly, yet doesn't feel rushed. Will we get back stories for Swan, Tristan, Sean and the other birds?

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