All Comments on 'Weekend at the Cabin Ch. 01'

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DudesDudesDudesDudesalmost 11 years ago
Nice

Nice start. Keep going. I'm anxious to see where it leads.

chesthairslavechesthairslavealmost 11 years ago
18 Year Old Hormones Act Fast in New Directions

Big improvement from Barn Buddies. Actions are more descriptive. Hunter and Jeremy have emotions. Definitely would like to see more of how they and the story develop. You might explore why Hunter was not completely at ease when Jeremy stopped sucking, and roamed his hands on other body parts.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Good but

Jeremy should have cleaned up Hunter's mess

Rwa4768Rwa4768over 6 years ago
Good

I wanted he I'm to keep the shooting cock in his mouth and swallow his friends cum.

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