All Comments on 'BabySitter's Present'

by Ashson

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betrayedbylovebetrayedbyloveover 10 years ago
Huh?

Why am I making the first comment? Okay, he goes.

The wife must be an alcoholic. To not remember giving her husband to the nineteen year old babysitter is preposterous.

To rate this I have to be sane so I'm just going to be neutral.

Insanity prevails.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
humor

Should have been featured under humor.

SparksWillFlySparksWillFlyover 10 years ago
OK I Am a Hypocrite

I have said in comments I don't like your wife sharing stories and, lo and behold, you write a husband sharing story. You got me good.

thebuffalothebuffaloover 10 years ago

I found it a bit more humorous than erotic. It is well enough written, but the characters come across, (to me), as rather superficial and not well developed.

"Wedding tackle?" That is a new one on me.

LickideesplitLickideesplitover 10 years ago
Before

Before I could tell him I wasn't THAT kind of girl, I WAS!

My least favorite out of a passel of winners!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Not bad, but.........

This was ok, but the actual sex could have been much longer and more descriptive. If you do that then I will definitely be looking forward to seeing what Tony does with Karen away from his wife in the future.

unicorn64unicorn64over 10 years ago

I thought they said Tony was going to teach her. There was no foreplay building her up for her fist time, I'm sorry but this was more rape than teaching her anything. There was no intimacy at all. Wham am thank you man. I could not give five stars.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago

Ending hints towards a follow up

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

Did Asshon rape the babysitter too? That's his thing.

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