All Comments on 'stormy night'

Stormy Conjugation !

I'm not sure how I feel about the last line. It kind of is a cute counterpoint to this wonderful image you've created of this couple who accompanied by a storm make a storm of their own. But do you want cute? Also, everything until that line is more showing than telling and then you tell us something. I think the poem would work well without that last line, would be more powerful and moody. But it really depends on the effect you're going for. And the title is meh, a problem I often encounter with my own poems lol. You can always change that if you want, but the poem is definitely a keeper!

get in do what you have to do and get out, ignore, you've already done that

ticklish/Relish -good one

Each strike silhouettes - good

5ed

Really nice - and no violence! (inside joke)

I agree with Antagie about the final line. Consider completing the circle with just one final word: strikes. I think 1201 calls it a box, or something like that. For the title, how about Flash? Regardless a solid 5. Bravo.

with the final line being omitted? I feel that it would read much better as you suggested. I wasn't looking for cute at all Angeline.

Desejo, I like your addition it seems to give it finality or box in. As to the violence how do you know there was no bdsm happening in that room lol ;)

Thanks for your time to comment.

I think the term 12 used was casement or framing

I liked it Tod for the simple reason that you are moving to distill your thoughts. Read up on minimalism if you have time

Thanks Harry. For the heads up