All Comments on 'Cheeky'

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I. Noticed you asked about tazz he commented on one of my poems rip it off a few days ago and that's the last time I saw him

by breaking the lines differently. For example:

Did you know a mans beard grows

fastest when he anticipates

sex? I have to shave every day

since you've been around.

Maybe that's not to your taste but if you think about what word in a line would most make a reader eager to go on to the next line, that is probably the best place to break. "Anticipates" is a natural because you want the reader to anticipate what comes next. The others maybe you could tinker with, but it's just food for thought. :-)

Overall I like that you've got a whole subtextual story resting on those few lines. That's not easy to do imo and why I keep saying you're a natural!

timing is a bitch

this one needs filler, i.e. more stuff

I've seen this before I got it as a joke in my inbox last week

Made me giggle...

I'd call this poem "beardy", not cheeky.

BA-DUM-TSH!