All Comments on 'In The Dim'

Liked this line WD. leaves a visual and aural image in me. enjoyed the cadence and denouement.

Your poems are often painful for me to read because of the subject matter, but I think any poem that evokes emotion in me as a reader is doing something right. And there is a little hopeful ending to this poem, unless I have it wrong. Keep writing and push yourself in new directions as you can. Some wonderful lines, by the way, lots of muted movement.

Thank you for the read.

I'm not sure exactly what this is about, but it doesn't matter. The lack of clarity and things that go bump in the night quality is part of the poem. Well done.