All Comments on 'Two Wives Are Better...'

One big happy poly family, I loved it!

~daisy~{M}

It makes for pleasant reading and tells a sexy tale. Ronnie W.

great story, i tried this in real life with mixed results. i love your happy ending, still writing mine.

This should be the norm for all married couples. How erotic! I am envious.

If we introduce Don87654 to Christie052780, what will we get? Good karma and little else until Don gets some good friend to impregnate her and then we'll have JPB34567! These two were made for each other! She is his wet dream.

It is a bit too farfetched for my liking. the writing style was boring and not enough detain in the sex.

I'd like to see a continuation on this one. Perhaps you could write some extra chapters about the lives together as the pregnancies developed and how Doug keeps making babies in both of you, or how you might be living nude all the time in your home and back yard, and fucking at will? Christie, I'd love to give you my low sperm count cock to luxuriate in as I shoot my cum into your depths.

This story was enjoable, but all of the relationship delevopements happened way to quick. Also you hinted at some FF action during the wedding night defflowering, but never followed up on it and that was really dissapointing, especially as you had that whole bit about tension that ended up being not lesibian tension but jealousy that was way to easily overcome.

WOW, I must say this is the single best thing I've ever read on Internet. You have such a beautiful and sweet writing style and you really have a gifted skill in bringing out emotions and eroticism with words. I hope to see more of your stories like this. I loved every this story by every word!

It is a good & sensible story I ever had read it.