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twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
see comment on other

otherwise 5

you are dropping words in slots,

align

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
All three of your poems today are well written

but I think this is the best because it says a lot with few, simple words. I'm going to recommend your poems on the forum. Thank you for the read.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
unusual, liked it

not sure what twelve means by dropping words into slots.

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