by Gunthur
This story was raw, hot, passionate and seductive. You captured the characters well; making the reader feel as though she or he was there within the story too. Well done.
fellow Lit writer,
_Lady1SensuaL1Fire_
A 24 year old virgin that fingers the guy's ass the first time she's with him. She's waxed her own ass. But the story also reveals that she's been concerned about his reputation and that he acts like a gentleman. Doesn't sound like the writer understands women. The guy is self absorbed and knows shit about pleasuring a woman. Otherwise Bowden sounds like a delightful misogynistic asshole.