All Comments on 'Taken by Pirates Ch. 01'

by scarlett_waters

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I'm Hooked!

I can't wait for the rest of this story! I can tell it's going to be a good one!

inspector123inspector123over 10 years ago
Good start

Please continue. ...

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago
Whoop! Whoop!

An honest to goodness bodice ripper! I don't think James will remain so polite. Welcome to Lit.

KittenCuddlerKittenCuddlerover 10 years ago
Yay Pirates!!!

Please continue as I have a serious soft spot for pirates! Great start by the way and I hope you continue :)

secretsub1107secretsub1107over 10 years ago
Love it!!

Absolutely wonderful start! I cannot wait to hear more about Katherine and James!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago

Please continue, this looks great!

pheobecharmedpheobecharmedover 10 years ago

Love this awesome pirate tale to start :-) can't wait for more katherine and james.

redyellowgoredyellowgoover 10 years ago
great start

welcome to lit....do not abandon us! Keep this going!

didntseeuxtheredidntseeuxthereover 10 years ago
Lots of potential!

Welcome! I already love your writing. A bit short its ok since it's your debut story ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
great

Can't wait for the next one.

afridelleafridelleover 10 years ago
Nice start

Well that was a nice teasing start :) Looking forward to more, hopefully soon ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Careful of your wording

You stray a bit though it shows you try to get some of the water rats lingo, but you slip. Almost as if your need for spelling things correctly outweighs the need to make their piratey gutteral language appear scary and in true form.

Good start though and aside from what I've written above I believe you've got something good here.

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