by scarlett_waters
I can't wait for the rest of this story! I can tell it's going to be a good one!
An honest to goodness bodice ripper! I don't think James will remain so polite. Welcome to Lit.
Please continue as I have a serious soft spot for pirates! Great start by the way and I hope you continue :)
Absolutely wonderful start! I cannot wait to hear more about Katherine and James!!
Love this awesome pirate tale to start :-) can't wait for more katherine and james.
Welcome! I already love your writing. A bit short its ok since it's your debut story ;)
Well that was a nice teasing start :) Looking forward to more, hopefully soon ;)
You stray a bit though it shows you try to get some of the water rats lingo, but you slip. Almost as if your need for spelling things correctly outweighs the need to make their piratey gutteral language appear scary and in true form.
Good start though and aside from what I've written above I believe you've got something good here.