All Comments on 'Sales Call'

It would be advisable to not change from 1st person to 3rd halfway through the story. That is rather annoying.

While the story was nice and all the words were spelled correctly. The spell check you used didn't catch the problems. She shuddered not shuttered, No many should be not many.... there are several other areas like this as well. Might want to have someone read it over before posting.

Well done though.