All Comments on 'Pammy Submits Ch. 01'

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Lionheart61Lionheart61over 10 years ago
Interesting

Quite a good opening. I will enjoy seeing where you take the couple from this point.

TheWorldSpinsTheWorldSpinsover 10 years ago
Good start

I'm interested in seeing this one continue.

lawnlawnover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thank you for your comments and thoughts. I'm encouraged and hope you all continue to try and enjoy my writing.

lawnlawnover 10 years agoAuthor
Feedback

Readers,

I'm too much a newbie to know how to do everything required of a lit writer. I have received feedback that was not posted her about 'Pammy Submits' nor does there seem to be a way to respond. So I will do it here.

Your feedback was appreciated and I am flattered by your words:

'We thought your story was lovely. We often think of fantasies where we are so grateful we become an older man's pet.

They are only fantasies of course but they are scrumptious.

Can you let me know when you write your next story.'

I do not know how to let you know when my next story is out. Chapter 2 is out and Chapter 3 is pending. Keep a check on new story releases.

Thanks again for your kind thoughts

lawn

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Give yourself more time to practice in writing and composition

More practice in writing would make you a bettter writer

lawnlawnover 10 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks for your feedback, anonymous. I will do that. Any specific things you'd like to point out to help me do better.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

got me hard for some reason ..liked it

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