by TheMagicianWrites
Just another "erotica deprived" fool author.
wonder that the heck she does for PAYING Job??? This scene could be running in the mind of some but not many! If this is their life it sure is a sad one.
Just disgusting. Why would any man want a wife like this, or even want to fantasize about one?
At least the husband wasn't some poor pathetic lil bitch that got verbally and physically abused by the black guy with da HUGE COCK or the SLUT WIFE. She just fucked somebody else and turned him on. STUPID but not as bad as the other crap I've read lately.
But normal on this site. Huge dick, 36DD. anal, gallons of cum, etc.
I seldom get past the first paragraph. Sick, they should all be under an abnormal title.
He's not out of he house 5 minutes and she already has another lover in her pussy and its not some neighbor he'd recognize. Wow, what a load of crap.
I hope you choke on your next cream pie you stupid retard.
OK, she asked Hubby to STAY! He decided to go ahead and jog first. She claimed it would only take 5 or so minutes to shave herself clean. Hubby reconsiders and starts back to the house after a five minute warmup run. He maybe takes three minutes to sprint back.
Sweetie has shaves her pubes bald, Bull has suddenly arrived (or was HE hiding under her bed already?), and fucked Sweetie towards her first (?) orgasm. She was on the bottom, but pulled out and squirted on his prong. Then Sweetie gets ON TOP of the Bull (but somehow seems to get under him, because she can't disengage when he cums!).
There is no mention of her fertility status, but we are told the Bull is riding bareback! And Sweetie is enthralled when the firehose sprays her insides. Bull promptly gets up and leaves. (Whatever happened to that old staple of Black recovery time (measured in microseconds)? BTW - Sweetie may not EVEN know the Bull's name, or vice-versa. Those are never uttered in passion or otherwise...perhaps as he crawled out from under her bed?
How many Totally Stupid parts are piled one-on-top-of-the-other in this story? Granted, if one reads a HOT sentence, and whacks, then another, and whacks ... (repeat as needed...but caution, it is NOT that long of a story!) then it will probably be effective. Otherwise, it saves the reader switching over to the Humor category!
Do yourself a favor stop writing before u show us what a moron you really are. This was so sick .another chucky wannabe shumuck.
probably written by some git who's never touched a woman in his life
"... a hard, black penis that was at least ten inches long."
Studies on the subject consistently find that the ten inch erect penis is the absolute upper limit; I suppose your loving wife could have found herself a freak of nature. How did the narrator know it was ten inches, though?
And where did this black guy come from? Timing was exquisite.
This was a one star stroke story - no plot, not much of anything, lukewarm sex
Not very well done. The writing leaves much to be desired. The dialogue is stale and trite. The over-all plot is racist as hell.
Keep trying, though.
You didn't learn anything from the comments to your first story, did you? In 3 years your work still sucks
Do I need to say any more? The pickings are awful slim in loving wives, nothing but trash.
Another disgusting depraved author with a closet gay fetish! negative stars sicko!!!
Why don't you make yourself and these 2 stories you've written magically disappear from this sight cuckold!!!
And why is it always a black guy? Don't any white guys have big, dirty cocks? This whole thing was too formulaic. Nothing original and I didn't really care if the wife was a slut and he was okay with being a cuckold. Uninspired to say the least.
And then he showed up with an STD. And then they both turned up with Aids. The end to pure, utter stupidity.
Any man who willingly watches his wife...or girlfriend...have sex with another person deserves to (1) have to financially support the bastard children that are produced and (2) submit to physical castration.
I love the thought of my wife taking a black cock and him leaving his seed in her then me fucking her slutty fucking pussy hole after , I'm slowly getting her round to the idea of it
Another white wife stupid husband and black stud. Such a non-believable story
This is the most unimaginative piece of dung maybe ever! You poor little cuckie...maybe you can conjure up a brain and then use it to write a sentence that hasn't been written by a million other cuckies!
And NOT in a good way. More racial bullshit about a black man with a big dick. How original! And since her husband doesn't know if the BBC has made his wife pregnant or given her an STD, herpes or aids, why would he touch her with a ten foot pole? A divorce is forthcoming. Is any one really THAT stupid?
1 star
At first I thought he was watching her use a dildo. I quit reading when it became clear she suddenly was engaged in interracial adultery. This is racist garbage and a stain on Literotica.
The white was using a dirty black dildo. No name, no personality, nothing but a brainless dildo.