All Comments on 'The Doctor Will See You Now'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
dove is a bird

i think you mean dived

tangentjokertangentjokerover 10 years ago
Anonymous, it was dove rhyming with rove, not dove rhyming with love. Dove is correct.

Sorry about that. Interesting story. I was already nervous about what goes on in doctors' offices.... Wow.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
idiot

THERE IS NO WAY TO RIGHTLY USE THAT WORD UNLESS YOU ARE TALKING ABOUT A SUBMARINE

jolly_rogeringjolly_rogeringover 10 years agoAuthor
Guys, no one's an idiot because of one word

The use of "dove" as a verb seems to be a regional thing, but generally acceptable:

http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/dove

If it jarred you when reading it, I'm sorry about that. I hope you found something to like despite that.

pontiacwhitepontiacwhiteover 10 years ago
Stop the petty criticism

This is a well told short story with some hot sex (which is what this site is really about). "Dove" can be used as the past tense of dive. Please look it up instead of relying on your self righteousness. Don't let the tiny little things that annoy you sap the fun out of life. They will consume you. Thanks, Jolly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Dove is the past tense of dive...rhymes with cove and rove

This isn't a regional word, it's universal in the English speaking world. If you are going to have the balls to criticize someone for a story you haven't paid for, at least make sure you know what you are talking about....which you don't.

As for the story, it was good, I enjoyed it, and I didn't expect War and Peace, so I wasn't disappointed or unreasonably critical

thebug37thebug37over 8 years ago
Pussy Ointment

Best doctor in the world - enjoyed a medical twist story. Truly interesting how you wove the protocol of medical treatment into satisfying for three people. Keep working on the scientific ointment.

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