by UnderYourSpell
I love the short simplicity, and the evocative images. I had to give it a 5.
Creating your own fireworks way more fun than watching them.
Only the soaring gulls
echo back
my keening cries.
so much information in so few lines.
My favorite subgenre of erotic poetry. Well done, UYS.
a really strong image with sound and sense made clear to the reader. :-)
Under the pier: so very old England. Love it, especially the evocative keening cries.