All Comments on 'Carrie And The Substitute'

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FCGuyFCGuyover 18 years ago
Not bad

B for effort B for boldness B- for proofreading. Decent story, tho. Good luck!

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
number 5?

if number 4 were to add another one wouldnt the total add up to three? now thats the kind of NEW MATH I could get to like. LOL

Angelindisguise223xAngelindisguise223xover 17 years ago
Woohoo!!!

M & E,

This was the first of the Carrie stories that I read, so I was caught completely off guard by the twist, which was wonderfully done. You have me addicted to these two characters. Please keep writing for these two.

<3 Kara

christinelouise13christinelouise13over 12 years ago
Quite Surprising

When I first started reading this, I knew it was a sequel with Carrie. However, I had assumed that since this is in the mature category that the substitute in question was someone much much older like in his 40's or something. Never did I imagine that it was Wade from the first installment. That was an excellent and very welcome twist. Makes me wish I was Carrie. Going to go read the next installment now. Bravo!

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