All Comments on 'Erika Blossoms Ch. 11'

by SmoovB

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masterslave00masterslave00over 10 years ago
Hmm...

Very interesting plot reminding me of something I did few years ago... Are you reading my mind somehow?

redyellowgoredyellowgoover 10 years ago
This was an awesome chapter

you set up so much material for later development...just a great chapter, great dialog. 5* for the writing, storyline and plot development for this chapter. This could be a major turning point. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very good

I love that you've made her libido a character all its own. Truly fantastic.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fantastic

Beautiful. Well written, erotically suspenseful, and fetishly on point. In totality, i'd expect a novella.

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