All Comments on 'My New Sister'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
story

all the same FUCKING SHIT

prop69prop69over 6 years ago
Great story

I am surprised no one has left a message before.

I love the premise behind the story.

A sister you did not know you had. Then finding her.

And she was an AMAZING FUCK.

Looking forward to the next 2 chapters.

paladin1954paladin1954over 3 years ago

The concept was good. The editing needed editing. The whole piece was wordy, sometimes saying the same thing three different ways...punctuation, etc. needs much work. All in all, not a bad story, but simply hard to read. 4 stars.

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 3 years ago

What a whore bitch of a sister. He should send her home and forget about that dominating bitch. I'm passing on the rest of the story.

Radomir1Radomir1about 2 years ago

Of course it's good to find a sister.

But why is she jumping on his dick after only a few hours of knowing him?

What's the reason? What does she want to accomplish?

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