All Comments on 'Raising an Army'

I liked the story idea of bearing an army. I can't wait to see what is to come. The sex description was also kind of hot.

I dig the impregnation theme. Surprisingly well done, Too few of them are posted in my opinion.

Too short, needs editing and a longer backstory

I think you are a great writer and you have a natural talent! I love the demon theme! I also love the way you write!!!! Keep writing!

I hope that you sent a copy of this to Fenoxo to ead. If you did I sure as hell hope he puts it in the next update. Dam it. now I need to go play some CoC. I wonder if any one else here plays and what their Compiaon has been up to... Hmm, something tasty to think about.

5/5 and a fav

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Blessed Be