All Comments on 'Caitlyn's Treatment Ch. 03'

my telephone book comes quicker to a point. if this goes on like that we will know by x-mas that she needs sun protection factor 20 on an average sunny day.

....I agree with the previous comment. The pace leaves much to be desired.

Good story, but you'll lose readers if you continue to "circle" without "landing."

Nice premise, but in three installments, there is nothing really going on yet.

Maybe she is bi and just has not accepted it yet? Another good chapter. But so far pretty much a normal Dr visit. We will see how this progresses.

It takes far too long to provide any sexual motivation to continue reading the story. Condense.