All Comments on 'I Never Meant To Fall In Love Ch. 04'

I like Lauren

I certainly wouldn't pay for your boring work! and the email within the story? 50 Shades much?

Just wanted to say contrary to my other anon peer I love this story the sex was one of the hottest scenes I've read on hear and I look forward to eusas dirty talk and possessive nature

Lauren is the one. I like her with him. I hope he doesnt fall in love with eliza

Great story so far.

So maybe he's going sleep with eliza..right at some point? I really like lauren , if not maybe she deserves someone better

I hope he does not fall for Eliza. I would have loved to see where his and Lauren's story goes. I hope you add some more to this story.

I don't like where this story is going, im for lauren and esau.

why oh why is this happening... i believe he should jump on the plane and go back home immediately in the next chapter ;l i dont like where this is going

Why did you stop?

I do feel like most of the others and would like to see Lauren end up with Esau! However that is only because that is what you wanted us to look forward to. Don't let our opinions take you away from your vision of these characters!

But please do continue the series. :-)

Please continue, i am hoping for lauren and essau together. Essau and eliza can be platonic with her being the foil that gets lauren to show her feelings towards essau withiu meaning too. And maybe eliza can hire lauren so essau wont feel office inappropriate. Or something else fo lauren wile esau is gone. Just please continue, this is the first time i have commented on a story..

Please continue this story, you cant leave us hanging!!! I would love to see how this plays out. I love a good Interracial story and you have one in the making.

Can we please have more? Pretty please? I loved it

Please -- you've got to finish this love story! And when he gets back, please get them together! I imagine sexy Esau with a spread, of dark chest hair that will tease Lauren and caress her breasts perfectly. Love the story as you have it set up now!