All Comments on 'Betrayal 10'

Thrilled to see a new chapter and greatly enjoyed it. Glad to see you back!

I don't post normally at all but this story has been a joy to read. I would love to see this expanded to full novella size if not book since the only problem I have with it is how fast it's progressing.

But this long without anything, the story one short page that doesn't really go anywhere. Keep going. I'm looking forward to more.

glad to see your back. good story but the chapter was a little short.

FINALLY we have been waiting forever for this chapter. it feels like yrs since you updated it and we move ahead by 1 page,but atleast we moved ahead. please dont wait so long for the next one.

My day just became a great one. Just found a good storie and want to know when this will come out as a best seller novel. Thanks for a great read

An incredibly engaging story that doesn't rely on the trope that most stories here have. You write well enough to be a published author. Cannot wait for more.

I just found this, thanks to the recent update. I hope we don't have to wait long for more.

I am torn about the labeling of this tale though. Given that this is LitEROTICA, I think this should be in the non-erotic category. But then we scifi fans would probably have missed it.

But not matter where it gets put, I thank you for this interesting story. THe plot moves forward rapidly and the characters are all fleshed out enough to have understandable reactions. I have this story playing in my mental cinema and I think I like the movie it creates. THere is enough action, well enough spaced, to give it some excitement.

Thanks again.

Just discovered this series, and I'm incredibly hooked. Great so far, keep up the good work!

I have been waiting so long!! I'm glad you were able to give us an installment. I still love this story and hope to see something more from you soon. Can't wait to read more. Please don't forget us lowly readers!!

Thank you for another chapter, look forward to the next!

So... just woke up... opened the site, but realized I had to piss like crazy, right as I was about to get up, saw this title...

Risked death by putting off pissing to read this, it hurts so bad... NEED MOAR!!!

TOTALLY WORTH THE WAIT (ok, now to go get rid of the pain)

Thank you, thank you, thank you for continuing the story. Please don't make us wait too much longer for more.

This has been as good as some sci-fi novels i've read off the shelf. You've done a good job keeping it interesting. Your character development has been good. I also can't wait for you to update. This is one story that would be a shame to not finish and I hope that you do. Thank you for a great read.

This story is great so please post the next chapter soon.

I loved this story the first time you put it up and you have definitely improved it! Please keep writing! I have been waiting a really long time, faithful until the end.

I get confused when you refure to bridgets eye color as green and then sometimes blue.Doesent really matter.this is a great story although the last chapter was a bit short.keep up the great work and please plan on finishing this story for your loyal fans.

Your success is determined in your ability to finish things.

is this not the same place you left off 2yrs ago when you decided to rewrite the whole thing?

Don't leave us hanging. I'm new to this story and would like to know how it ends.

I agree with the previous comment. I would like to see the rest of the story.

Going to finish this or is this it?

Next time you decide to re-write the whole tale to make it a better read, don't. If you want to make it a better read, finish the damn story. (lol, a little nod).

Damn, another unfinished story. Please don't be like a handful of others on this site who write a few chapters and then disappear on their readers. Even a status update will do. Whether you've taken a sabbatical to look for your muse, gone to recharge your batteries, gone on an extended vacation, or just plain haven't had the time to continue, posting an update on your current situation will at least let everyone know what's going on. This story is good enough that you now have people following you and continuously checking for updates. I think you owe your readers that much. Thank you, and be well.

~rewski84

I have decided to give one star rating to all the abandoned stories (only abandoned stories, stories with conclusions are safe) in the top list. I would like to read from other more active writers and would like to see them in the top list....

If you search on the web you can find the previous version of the story and its completed.

if you check his twitter, hes busy with life and WoW... lots of WoW...

Its his life, but sadly enough WoW > Betrayal for him, cant blame him, its his life!

sad also to say it as a fan of the FIRST rendition of this story, it got to this same point last time and stopped as well, lovely being strung along :*(

where if it was complete then why could it not be posted here by now?

Another unfinished story to delete! Why is it always the best ones?

If this series is posted somewhere else in a completed state, please let us know where to find it. It's been a year since chapter 10 was posted. I really hate it when a good story is dropped by the author with no explanation. This seems to happen way too often!

Loved everything so far, look forward to you coming back with more.

Its been 3 years please post a new chapter!

I just decided I wanted to reread it again when I noticed your post that you are still working on the story. I hope you continue and post a chapter soon as it is a very good story and deserves to be finished.

This has so much promise, it will be a shame if it goes unfinished .. silently.

Such a great story. I hope the author didn't have bad happen. Please continue!

Great story! Such a shame that nothing has been written in the last 7 years. I hope that one day you'll come back and finish it.

It would be awesome if you would continue this series!!

Just finished rereading this story

Great Story and Wonderful to hear you are going to complete it

What author name will we search for?

CRW

Been waiting 8yrs only to see you have decided to not finish it here

Looking forward to the finished book. Will gladly buy a copy.

Need more!!

Please more. 5 stars of 5!