All Comments on 'Three Little Poems About Love'

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GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Five....

....for three. Simple yet spot on! The final line in the first poem could go, in fact just the first verse alone would suffice,

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
What Tristesse said

A wonderful little trio that is spare but rich with sensuality. I'd end the first one at "flame" as I think it would balance the poem better, but I'm quibbling because it's all really good. Thanks for sharing it. :-)

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