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well written and love the classical reference. Thank you for the read. :-)

....caught me by surprise. It isn't easy to put the reader in the poet's shoes but you have done that here. The speechless yearning, the wondering never to be answered. Lovely poem. Great line breaks and I too love the reference to Patrocalus' relationship to Achilles. Five.

Erotic without being blatant very nicely done

I actually blushed. Haha...this poem has raw sex appeal, its arousing with that certain kind of vulnerability that's appealing. Honestly this is good erotic poetry which I don't get to say often enough and I'd say it even if it weren't addressed to me.