All Comments on 'A Erotic Dream...'

'A Erotic Dream...- I woke up form an erotic dream and had to share. '

Make up your mind.

Does "a" come before a vowel or does "an"?

Do you ever like exclamation marks!?!?

Especially when you run your moth over the material!!!!!!!!!!!!!

And I'm sure that helps you choose a tense and stay with it!!!!!! Not to mention other shitty spellings!!

Please!!! Do us all a favor and flush any other stories you've written!!! And don't write anything else!!!!! You suck!!!!!

If you want to be credibly critical grow a pair and use a listed account put your money where you mouth is. Some of us are not gifted in grammar and spelling but can tell a story. Can you? Publish or shut up. An anon complaint should carry all of the weight of the paper it is printed on!