All Comments on 'Camping Fun with Kim and Candy'

very nice, a little punctuation and one missed antecedent, but overall a wonderful story.. what next?

Wow reminded me so much of a similar fucking session I had with my boyfriend and my best friend!!

Thank you. I liked it a lot, so please write more... Yes, there were some errors, but easily overlooked for your 1st story. A mentor or proof reader would help eliminate most of these errors. As far as comments made by Anonymous "to bad they can't spell their name" - otherwise they would have been proud to let you know who made that remark. I‘d like to read their stories, but they probably have none.

Good story. There should be more with these two.

Suddenly all of your English teachers are reading your story.

great story