All Comments on 'Counting'

Mixed Wrestling between couples ?!

Beautiful writing and the title and final line pull it all together.

good closer

...I question the use of "vines" as a verb. "she twines about...." or "she is a vine about..." but that is my only quibble in an otherwise lovely piece.

5?

care much for your use of "body" twice in the first line. You could have said, perhaps, "her body vines about mine".

I guess I missed something because I could not make much sense of this even attempting to understand it in an abstract way. It' s probably just me, but it seems to be much ado about not much. I did find it interesting though and that I itself would bring me back to read more of your poems.

:)

Using counting as a ways and means of staving off climax, so as you can writhe with hers

plant seeking out the sun,

climbing, always climbing the build up to orgasm?

another well written erotic piece, subtle, and as said earlier a great ending line