All Comments on 'The Shaved Slave'

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klitorisringklitorisringover 10 years ago
Good story

I really like this story and looking forward to additional chapters! Hopefully Susan will do more sexual services and modifies her body to the guy's whims.

FA_JFFA_JFover 10 years ago

Hot and well written.

I'm a bit confused at the logistics and was slightly distracted. She's sitting on a bar stool. There is no mention of her bending over, yet she is at the right height for his cock to just slide into her mouth. He would be able to continue shaving if she was sitting up or bent over, either way. But how are cock and mouth meeting? I just can't fix the visual...

Look forward to the next chapter.

john1946john1946over 10 years ago
ok

Lots of promise, now lets see if you can hold interest and follow this with a real D/s story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
A Great Beginning

A great story. I enjoyed reading it. Perhaps, at some point, you could tell us how/why the girl decided to clipper shave her head. Keep at it.

pobearmanpobearmanover 10 years ago
Great Start

Love bald woman and the act of shaving, so submissive. Keep it up

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