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by atenai

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darkdance69darkdance69over 10 years ago
I enjoyed it.

It definitely shows promise. I would love to see this developed further. Wish I had dreams like that lol

misterragoomisterragooover 10 years ago
thank you!

It's my birthday and this was a great gift! Well paced, intriguing, definitely worthy of more chapters!

panjetarkan1panjetarkan1over 10 years ago
More, Please!

Definitely worth revisiting. Please continue your story - I am very interested in how this will play out.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
I like the idea

You have something here finish it 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Moar

MOAR

LunaWindLunaWindover 10 years ago
Could be great

If you develop this into a story about why they have these dreams, who they are, and how they eventually meet, it could be great. It's a very good begining for sure.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Oh my goodness

Yes, yes, YES PLEASE! I beg you to continue this story! I have to know what happens! Keep orgasming and riding that high,ideal for the best of stories. One of my absolute favorites.

Emily

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