All Comments on 'You Can Take Me If You Want To'

better. should be less pedestrian. try making the girl more cock-hungry, not just giving a mercy fuck. how about a pregnancy thrown in? (just for grins.)

should put more detail into it thoguth, made me cumm

My wife never got much attention from her cold and distant dad. Soon after meeting my step dad Bill, she took a strong liking to him. He is no stud and is about 5' 8", fat and bald. He remodels kitchens for a living. After about 3 months into our marriage I noticed Judy would dress sexy when she knew Bill would be coming over. Once she made sure Bill saw her in a new pair of see thru pink panties and tank top. Of course it was an accident. Sure!

I had him redoing the kitchen on the weekends and he stayed over.

Well after I saw his hand on her hip while they were in the kitchen I knew it would not end there. Not to get into anymore details but I said I had a headache and went to bed early. Judy was wearing her tight white short short that hugged her pussy and split the lips. Her red panties were visable. Judy said she would finish the movie with Bill and be in later. Fine thats just what I wanted. After about an hour I got up and peeked in the TV room. Not there. I heard Judy's moans coming from the spare room. I pressed my ear to the door and heard Bill talking dirty to her. "Judy honey I love your tight cunt. etc, etc." as he pounded my wife. Judy responded " Oh daddy I love you so much please fuck me longer." His fat belly slapped on her young body off and on for 10 more minutes. Judy grunted softly and when Bill said "oh I love my daughter's body so much" I shot my load into Judy's sheer pink panties

I loved it allthoug she could have enjoyed it a little more

Odd thing about being a step-dad. My only step-daughter took an instant liking to me as well! She's over 40 now, and I have somehow managed to deflect her attempts to seduce me for over 20 years! After reading this...? Maybe I'll just "weaken" just a bit! HOT story!

see i am a daughter and i love hearing daddy daughter stories soooo <3 yummy . just yummy its soo hot

My daughter in law is the most loving person I know. She is so sexy and make love to me whenever i need it

One of the hottest stories! I think I would have added that she had more thick hair behind those pantyhose. What a turn-on! Her easy soft coaxing made it really hot.

I read all your submissions dude. They are fantastic. You are good in writing and I think you know that. Please keep on writing.

Very sexy story....both takes are worth the read. Keep up the good work and let me know when you'll be posting others.

...and done in a very pleasant but sexy way..certainly panty wetting material

yur story was fantastic and caused me a strog hard on however my comment is a little different. i am fucking my daughter on a regular basis it ie great, she is married but i get to fuc her. why her husband does not i dont know buti am happy with the situation ans so is my daughter thanx

LOVED both versions!

Being a Lady knowing what plps need. She worked 2 get what she wanted. That was 2 good. Luv It. Dam Great

I really enjoyed reading both stories featuring the daughters-in-law coming to the aid of their husbands' fathers. It was well done and a very erotic piece. Keep up the good work.

I fucked my father in law for years and I loved it I have also fucked all my uncles my dad and brothers and cousins and I love doing them all its great

as HOT as the other story. Mmmm, the juices are flowing now. Thanks.

I loved her scooping up the bit of cum on her thigh. Would be nice to have her scoop all the cum out of her pussy and eat it in front of him, then perhaps a kiss afterwards?

this story has excellent pacing, humor and character development. sort of difficult to find in an erotic story. and it's HOT! i love that lisa coos to her step father during the act, just guiding him, and never uses a dirty word. how unexpected! excellent stuff!

story about a cheating slut and a scum bag of a father. The story was quite hot but just couldn't get past a slut of a wife who would do her husband's father and an asshole of a dad who would stoop to do his son's wife. What loyalty in such a wonderful family, to bad the son didn't catch them, wouldn't it be great if his private detective got photos that he could distribute to family, friends and coworkers?

The previous reviewer forgets that this is a <i>fantasy</i>. It's well written and has just enough detail to keep the combination of interest in the characters balanced with the erotic. Nice job!

I loved it! A tiny piece that is just simple and scrumptious.

Concerning the reviewer two before me:

I simply don't understand your comment. With that attitude, why even be reading on literotica? When viewed by people who aren't into the specific erotic fantasies of each category or genré, the stories would be considered ethically void or sick or perverse. In which case, why in the world read it?? It's not like it's a true story; the author even mentions that the idea came to him from a single line from a novel, so why the judgemental nonsense? Your comments couldn't even be chalked up to constructive criticism. It's like reading an entire entry in the Incest\Taboo section and then leaving a comment about how sick incest is. Or reading a "Non-Consent" entry all the way through and then flaming the author, or better yet the actual characters in the story, about how wrong rape is and how sick and messed up the story is. Unless, of course, that phenomenon is actually your kink! ;-) otherwise, go read something more to your moral standards and leave this Fantasy to those of us that will enjoy it.

Anyway...Wow, what a mouthful! And, most likely, a complete waste of time LOL. Oh well. It's written now so I'll post it.

So: Great fantasy! I love both versions but I seemed to like this one more.

- Umthondo-Wisizwe

I have read this before and enjoyed it then. I think all men who have a beautiful Daughter-In-Law would love to fuck them. I know I sure would, but I didn't luck out and she sure isn't pretty and I sure wouldn't fuck her. Thnks again for writing the story

I never thought I would but it happened once, & from then on any time I wanted sex her pussy was mine & 2 son's later the son still has know idea that I am fucking her more then him.

With me, my daughter-in-law was in the hospital, our son came to stay with us. My wife dressed scantily around the house, I noticed my son watching her and he got a boner! When I told her, she got excited, I told her to give him a blowjob. She lay down on the sofa, put her head on his lap and asked him to rub her back. As he did she turned to face him putting her face right against his cock! I got up and left the room, as I did she put his cock in her mouth! He didn't last long and came in her mouth. When she came to bed she told me that she fucked Him too! She still does to this day! She even lets me watch sometimes.

if you fuck your son's wife, you a piece of shit who betrayed your wife and family. So fuck your self bastards,

WOW!!! I love that she had pantyhose and no panties, and he could see her thick bush.

Very hot! My wife has been there to comfort and encourage men on both sides of the family through the years. She gives her love, passion, and pussy willingly and sweetly. Sexual comfort is one of the things she does well. We agreed many years ago that this is one of her great talents. Sometimes a man just needs a wet comforting pussy to settle him down.

This one is better than the other one, IMHO.

I’m guessing the author lives on the east coast somewhere

Great story of passion with the frisson of consenting naughtiness.