All Comments on 'Fit Mom Ch. 01'

well written story, nicely paced, and appropriately dark about the consequences of this kind of relationship. I'm impressed. I'd like to read more. The what happens afterwards is always the downside to this genre of stories, it's either not addressed or it's all fairy tales. Here the sex has consequences, which it almost always does in the real world, and that is one of the things I enjoyed most about this story. And oh yeah, the sex is hot.

The way this chapter ended seems to suggest that you are going to take this story in a direction that is not very original. I hope you don't do that.

mother and son relationship the way it should be bare cock exploding inside her womb with no condom or birth control with the inevitable results. dad should just enjoy the help and share his sex partner

Nice writing. Good pace. But you seem to have finished with this episode in their lives. The father's knowing changes everything and complicates this beyond the range of a short story. So how are you going to continue? By having the son invite his friends to fuck her? He's deciding for his mom and she didn't seem the type to let his friends do her. Not likely at all. I think you took a wrong turn at the end but I will read your follow up to see where you go.

Fit. Mom? Sounds like unfit mom. It's quite evident that good old mom is one sick slut. Well sonny boy should do to her what she did to him. Except turn her into a fulltime cum slut. She needs to be put in her place which is on her back spreadeagled on gangbang til she can't walk. Break in that tight little ass of hers with a good old dry fuck. Just shove it in dry duck her raw. Then make her clean his shit covered cock with mouth til she gags.

If you make it in to just a mom slut story,you lose the mom /son love story.keep her pregnant will his baby,with him having to help her.you want to go to the darkside with your story, but you don't have to do that to have a good story!he loves his mother deep down thats why he want to hurt her.so she cann't hurt him.don't let his father keep him from her.love your story five stars

Boring

After he turns the tables on his mom, with his friends and him making her airtight, she needs to come onto to her daughter and then give her daughter to her son.

original. look forward to part 2.

The preface on this one got me. If it's a "true " story then why do you need to make it "hot"? It either is or isn't. If you embellish, then how "true" is it? And if that was all just a plot device, I've wasted my time..

To my mind one of the best incest stories ive EVER read.Whether its true or not....doesnt make one iota difference....its bizarre....original..intriguing....and a spell biund read for any incest lover.

The imminent plot unfold in third part....plus pseudo revenge/fulfilment makes for a very interesting climax

I personally would be VERY disappointed if you did not carry through with intended part two....and will avidly watching for it.

Thanks for writing and sharing a highly erotic story

One of the most rediculous stories in this genre!

Nail the crazy bitch!

Waiting with bated breath for part 2. *Dizziness setting in...*

The story is vivid in my mind...it keeps playing back! Great job! Hope to see future posting!

A good story line and a hot and erotic story, I just hope that he doesn't turn his mother into a cheap slut.

Thanks for the read.

Nice!

Great change of pace.

Can't wait to read the next one.

Thanks!!!

Awesome story, one I'll read over and over

I have to say that is the worst god damn ending I ever read .What kind of rat bastard would be like that sorry ass son, fuck the dad you don't sell out your mom period.Whatever mom wants she gets she's earned it .

Its rare a story on here can interest both my brains but tell leads me on in interest. What happens next?

First, let me say this is a great, original and creative, story by a highly talented 30 year old author. 19 year old Steve is like most boys his age. His mom comes on to him, cajoling him about how much she needs him, feels him up and says he's so much bigger than his father, pushes her bountiful tits against his chest and her motherly cunt against what the kid's got hard in his pants. Steve's grossed out, he panics, and tries to escape his mother's clutches. But at the same time he's fired by lust, his 19 year old balls are on fire, "my first thought, and I felt a fleeting shame from thinking it, was that I wanted to blow it in her pussy." He's feeling what any young guy would feel. The normal, completely natural desire for that warm wet hole between his mother's legs, the same hole he came out of. Still, the outmoded idiotic "taboo"--the taboo that mandates that what a boy's got between his legs must never ever what are you crazy come together with what his mommy's got between hers--paralyzes his mind. So, as usual, it's up to mom to do the work. Ever since she felt it through his pants, she's been thinking about what her boy's "got hanging between his legs," and she's ready to claim a mother's right to her own son's fat penis. Steve, who already half wants to share his penis with his mom, finally gives in. His mother spreads her thighs for her baby boy, and baby boy drills his cock up inside her, up to his balls. Now that the ice is broken, the stupid taboo cast aside like a used kleenex, Steve finds he just cannot get enough of his own mother's cunt. He's fucking her every damn chance he gets, all over the house, day and night. His hard young cock is up inside his mommy more than it's just hanging down over his balls. Like when she's in the kitchen, the boy "fed her my cock through the fly of my jeans. A load in her pussy, without a thought given." As casual as that. Mom thrills with being filled to overflowing with her kid's potent young sperm as the glorious stuff streams down her ass and legs. The couple discovers that he's fucked a baby up where he was once a baby. And that's when the trouble begins. Dad the embittered cuck, talks weak-willed Steve into believing that it was all a terrible mistake and all his mother's fault. What shit. I agree with the reader who wrote "nice." A much better solution is for dad and son to give mom the love she needs and deserves, to welcome the blessed new addition to the family, and from now on for Steve and his father to share her motherly twat. Of course, while dad gets his mercy fuck once or twice a week, it's young Steve who'll be stuffing his cock up that unique in all the world twat and unloading his balls into his mommy whenever he gets the urge, which is like all the time. Mom's happy, the guys are happy, and all's well that ends well.

Hope you add more stories soon, I really enjoyed this one. Whether a sequal or something in a similar vein. Well written too.

I loved the story. It was a pleasurable read, right through to the end, where I found the ending rather weird.

Why wasn't the mom shared by the father and the son?

This was a good story, but a bit weird. No way the dad should be involved or having the son go snaky, just mom & son, otherwise it was ok,just way to weird in spots, and didn't need to be.

I think the son is over thinking it. He should stick with his mom.

I enjoyed the story but what happened to the part 2.

I think it makes sense for her to be with the other boys more than the son. Looking forward to seeing wherever you take it.

Really explains your other stories, the dark place they seem to come from. Why did you not finish this...

What a sick mother...

My compassion for you hopes you never need to post it, if prologue is true.

Can't believe no one has picked up on dad's comment about "just another affair". Dad could tell she was getting sexual attention from somebody just like she has before, because he wasn't giving it to her. Easy to see his anger was over her messing with the head of her own son.

Mom has been manipulating men, with serious effect, for 20 years, using a body she's only improved as she ages. A predator no one wants to resist.

As a story, hotter than hot, told with honesty, some guilt and shame, but more lust than anything. The head games were the hottest, but also most destructive to any kind of normal relationship.

Should be answered with "My money, my choice".

If she can unilaterally make a decision for both of them to keep the child without his consent, then he should be able to decide to not pay for it. When women get pregnant they act as is it's completely the guys fault, and that they had zero input. Then afterwards if she wants it, and he doesn't, she gets to decide for both of them. It's her right to choose. The guys right to choose evaporates at conception.

Fucking awesome writing and communication skills. And kept me hard the whole trip even while I chuckled then winced with the ups and downs. Bravo!!!

U fucked up D end with D boy talking about sharing mom with his friends.

Tghi is a well written story. Taking the author at his word, I believe the story to be true. I honestly feel sorry for everyone involved. This story reflects the worst aspects of an incestuous affair. I can not use the word "love" because there wasn't any. How the author emotionally and psychologically survived is remarkable. I have know women like the mother. Her biggest fear in life is getting old. Finally, it appears that the father got trapped into marriage, via pregnancy. Although I have no problem with mutually consenual incestuous loving relationships in real life, this affair was not consenual nor loving.

Ok, time for you to write the sequel!

Awful, emotionally this turned me right of.

You NEVER share your mom or your sister

Daaaamn hot! Awesome story thank you!

The mom is bat shit crazy, and not in a good way. She seems seriously psychotic. Like a true blue bunny boiling stalker. I don't know where this is going, and I don't want to know. I'm out.

once more, i forgot to check when this story was written and if you'd published the next chapter(s). Ten years now, so , of course, we're fucked! I don't usually go for these dark ones, but took a chance, only to find out you broke your promise! I did expect for Steve to get more head games from his mom, especially considering how dire he made things out to be: no humiliation, almost no dominance submission games. The one thing the son wanted, she withheld: her love! No kissing! That's when he should have run to the nearest exit, cuz she truly was BATSHIT CRAZY. But in that way, she kept him hanging on, trying more than once to evince love where there was none. Very sad. So she finally plays her trump card and they kiss. Only took her getting pregnant, but it's something. Maybe it was just an act on her part. Who knows.

the end of this story, or maybe just the end of this chapter, has his wheels spinning to farm out his mom. That would turn this whole fucking thing into a FARCE, making a mockery of the good work you've done thus far. How is he ever supposed to go from that to loving his mother?! He only wants to hurt her? They left things on a good note, then mom leaves her marriage behind. sonny boy needs to step up and be a father and wife to his growing family, not 'breaking' his mom. That's another thing his mom never tried: breaking her son. She did fuck bareback and gleefully told her son yippee i' still got it- i'm still fertile! Get both of them some psychoanalysis and they just might make a go of it. Maybe they can grow to know what love is. Write more, ya douche!

and who gives a fuck how far along with other stories you are when this one's in coitus interruptus limbo? It's a rotten thing to do to your readers