All Comments on 'Caribbean Tales: Emma's Initiation Pt. 03'

Be careful there, A! Your wry sense of humour is showing!

Great story! The best in the series so far because of the care that you've taken with the character development and with the subtle hints of wry humour in the narrative and the dialogue. I found myself feeling affectionate toward Natalie also.

Really good job here!

Throughout the story, I could almost smell the tropical breeze. The sex was sweet and delicious. Somehow the dialogue had me thinking in an earlier century though. I was almost surprised when the clothes you described were modern. I haven't spent much time in the Caribbean though, perhaps that's part of the island charm. Good story.

like the story line . also sets the pace for a continuation in the series

I enjoyed reading this small sequel of stories. It’s intensive, diverse with a few turns, even though not fully unexpected.

It would be great to have a final chapter, maybe with the three characters meeting a last time?

Thanks for sharing this story with us!