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Summer Sitter

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by Anonymous

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by looking4it08/26/13

Quite the little Peyton Place eh? Need a core card to see who is fucking who because apparently they don't all know for sure either.

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by Duna08/26/13

In medias res

In medias res is not good everytime method for more charcters story. A little longer story plot could help understand better who is who. It was a little disturbing writting.........BTW I know a married pair, who live happy life and they were step siblings...........

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by Anonymous08/26/13

very good

I would love more loving wives stories from you! *****

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by Anonymous08/26/13

Clever

What a hoot. At least one more twist than I anticipated. Best of luck in the contest.

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by Lickideesplit08/27/13

Well...

The reader either has to dislike everyone (maybe just half-dislike Troy/Tony, so far), or like 'em all! I think I'll dislike the (post-pubertal) lot of them!

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by patientlee08/27/13

Didn't see that coming!

I love a twist at the end of a story.

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