All Comments on 'Summer Condo'

Loved it.

Your matter-of-fact style of dialogue made the sex appear non-erotic. Try adding some descriptions of emotions and expressions to paint the whole picture.

all i had to see was that sick fuck endorse it and i knew it was a piece of crap.

Although not agreeing with the extent, Anon 'non-erotic' has a valid point. It is wonderful there is so little inhibition among them, but more expressed emotion would have made this tale better!

Congratulations!!!!!!!!

Excellent story!!!

I found it hit the spot perfectly. I can't wait for more, for the circle of activities to expand, for all HIS spots to be explored also.....

The ending doesn't really make sense. Is there going to be a part 2?

Good story, keep writing, part 2?

good scenery, hot sex scenes

Damn, i wish!

Two whores and an ass.