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World's Best Fishing Spot

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by Anonymous

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by Danno_6145508/27/13

I LIVED THAT SPLENDOR

I enjoyed this piece of fiction because it is located in such an awesome place. Those keys fish hooking back and around to Key West need to be lived upon for a year to really get a feel for the people, but you seem to know that.

Please consider extending this story. The Navy down there has a large contingent of married women who remain at a ready and looking for fun state of mind.

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by Anonymous08/27/13

TOTAL RUBBISH

Should write fair stories

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by Anonymous08/27/13

Bleh

Another idiot with 10" cock fantasies.

Quit writing. You suck!

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by mcbtws08/27/13

I made it to the fourth paragraph.

Then read 10" cock. Needless to say I quit reading right there.

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by RavenOnCa08/27/13

BS

Should of stopped reading at the 10" as well. What a waste of print.
Then when you said you felt inadequate...give me a friggin break!

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by mafia_patriarch08/27/13

use cock to catch slutfish

I actually kind of liked it. "Serious conservation of material "is hilarious. But I found "He will have her a dozen times and she will let him " a little borderline creepy for some reason. The "she will not even remember you in the morning " is just plain cold. A 10" isn't out of the realm of possibilities, but 6" diameter? Think about overall dimensions next time. Over and out.

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by Anonymous08/27/13

A ten inch cock is not out of the realm of possibility but its quite fucking rare!!!! Like most of you I stopped right there I did a brief skim over the rest but that was it. Six inches in diameter is just fucking stupid and then to say you felt inadequate was indeed over the top!!! You should of called this "Huge Cock Fantasies!!!" Really to bad, the setting you had placed for the story along with the fishing could have made for an excellent story. Hopefully you will learn from this and not repeat it in the future.

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by Anonymous08/27/13

TOTAL CRAP!!!

This story is a total load of bullshit! Too much time in Imagination land. If it had been based in reality it would have been pretty good, but as it is it's absolutely horrible. Keep writing. You just might need to change your approach a little, but it'll work out alright........a faithful incest reader.

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by wyvernwand08/27/13

Interesting Concept

Despite 'anonymous' readers comments it has an interesting plot. Obviously "find another fishing spot" has connotations of a follow up and hopefully an explanation.
To those who belittle a 10" cock mine is 9" so perhaps it's not so rare - some of us are neither small minded or small bodied.

Keep at writing - it gets easier as you go along. And while we hope readers will enjoy it, I also believe we write for our own fantasies or interpretations of real events.
Wyvernwand

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by Anonymous08/28/13

Tired of anonymous haters.

Wa wa wa wa wa. Is that all you guys are capable of doing? Whining because something doesn't appeal to you? Someone writes a good story and you have to act like your a critic and complain about it. So what if 10" cocks are always included in these stories. Guess what? Works of fiction. That means, someone takes the time to imagine a hot story, write it down, get it edited, submit it so that assholes like you can complain about how unlikely a 10" cock is. Did you enjoy the story? Or did it make you feel inadequate? Your cock must be too small so these 10" ones they write about make you feel like less of a man.
Enjoy the story. Let the writer enjoy a little poetic license and give the guys all 10" cocks. Let him (or her) give the women all 34DDD or bigger breasts with no sag and a tiny waist. Let the writer use their imagination to create a hot story and then do the unthinkable. Enjoy it.
Sit back, read the story and shut the fuck up. Stroke your tiny dick and enjoy it. If you can't do that well at least shut up so we can enjoy a good fantasy.
(Yes, I am posting as anonymous just to prove that we don't all have to bash the author.)

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by Anonymous08/28/13

I agree with anonymous - leave them alone

If all you can do is whinge and bitch like a spoiled two year old go somewhere else. Did it ever occur to some of you negatively attituded intellectual pygmies that some or most of this stuff is written as fantasy or fiction and is read as a form of escapism. if these words are too large for you then i suggest you return to kindergarten and leave the understanding and intelligent adults to their own devices. I to have a Literotica registration and have published on this site. If you remember the manners your mother tried to teach you be seen and not heard.

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by Anonymous08/28/13

Diameter vs 'Around'

Whatever the literary merits of the story may be, the author wrote ‘Six inches around’, i.e. a CIRCUMFERENCE of 6”, which is a diameter of a little less than 2”.

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by Anonymous08/28/13

WTF

THIS DOESN'T BELONG IN INCEST AND THE STORY IS CREEPY. PLEASE DONT POST ANYMORE STORIES HERE UNLESS ARE INCEST.

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by Anonymous08/28/13

Different

I liked the story and enjoyed the smell of the women. ( Yes the smell ). Enjoy your writing and don't let those negative anons get you down.

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by Anonymous08/28/13

This was a great story! I'll be keeping an eye out for more submissions from you, hopefully they will be south FL related.

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by Dimmu_Borgir08/28/13

Re: Tired of anonymous haters

What? You mean that people have to heap tons of praise on a shitty story just because YOU like it... and just because YOU don't like criticism? Piss off.

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by oldnornry08/28/13

Confused

Good story line, but I was confused at the "find another fishing spot!" Since all were agreeable to the fun. I would think about coming back. Cock size? Nobody cares, but circumference is about 3 times diameter. Ask any woman and she will laugh because she doesn't care. You ask a woman about PI she will think about banana cream pie or maybe apple pie. If she is really into it she might think of cream pie. Put things in perspective and keep writing.

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by redlion7508/29/13

if the incest only occurs in the last 5 lines does it still count?

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