WOW i didn't expect this at all, but way cool! i saw a few type-o's but this is one hot story that makes the reader want a whole-lot-more!
You seem to have a problem with numbers, first you give her vital statistics as 36DD-21-33 & then as 36DD-20-33. After that, you give the old mans cock length as 12" & in the NEXT sentence as 13". Please, please, please would you get someone to proof-read your stories before posting them, as it spoils what would otherwise be very good stories. So 3*'s only as the inconsistencies grate so much. Had you had them proof-read properly it would have been 4*'s, possibly even 5.
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