All Comments on 'Last Night was AMAZING! Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
editing names

hot story but 4th last paragraph you noted the name adam, and the 3rd last paragraph it changed to david.........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

some name mixups toward the end. adam joined you and adam kissing? Then Adam becomes David?

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