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All Comments on 'The Wine Offering'
by Kattaylor
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greenmountaineerover 10 years agoThis is wonderful. It felt like a dance between two lovers intertwined. My only quibble is
"I bathe my sweet lover in wine
and offer her to Dionysus
who will take her to Zeus for he will"
would have sounded more like music to me.
Wonderful poem!
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