by littlegirlinlove
This story is hot, rife with carnal abandon. The development is a bit abrupt, but the completeness, and vivid descriptions add an urgency well suited to the story. And not to get lost in the details...quite frankly this one got me off.
i think you really want to be fucked like this. if it happens, it probably wont be as good as your story, but you write dispassionately, it all about the fucking and the cum so i think you really want this good luck.
A bit lame in one sense, but the straightforward description is also rather horny in its own way...