All Comments on 'Vanessa and I - Ch 01: Perfection'

I like what is here in the porn , nitty gritty sense but classic storytelling has pretty much gone by the wayside. What's here is very good , maybe a bit shallow with the emphasis on aesthetics but we all veer to that spectrum from time to time.

Nice touch by author giving his narrator a gym-honed physique, buthanging a shade sub par down south. To get full marks the author would have deign to disclose more fully how they got to this liberal state of affairs. Still this could have been much worse.

I like the multiple by-laws and complications to carnal liberation disclosed. Big fan of audacious power plays on all levels here. ****

That was hot. I liked the rules. More...

I'm giving you a 1 just for that stupid statement.

Cows romping in the manure with a little steer.

Careful with spelling. Should be vise instead of vice.