All Comments on 'Swans Ch. 2'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 20 years ago
next chapter

How come you didn't continue the story?????

ebonygriotebonygriotover 15 years ago
Gritty reality

Without being overly sentimental you draw out the stark reality of Cassidy's beginings. You've created a multifaceted character that you can't dismiss as purely good or bad. Very skilful writing.

luv_romanceluv_romanceabout 14 years ago
hmmmm

no ending? i hope you will continue this. :)

ariesgirlariesgirlalmost 11 years ago

I don't feel sorry for Yvette and Cassidy, I only pity them. Both have mental scars from their youngers years that they don't see that it's affecting their lives. They don't like for men to use them but yet they are doing the same.

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